Thursday, November 19, 2009

55 fiCTioN #8

55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.


THE COMPASS
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He came back home to see his wife.
He had gone for counseling.
'Mentally ill' his friends said.
He always doubts his wife..
'He is fine now' she thought

Night.
They came to bed, early
and then he heard it
somebody is outside the room,

He peeped out...glancing at his wife...in disbelief...
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PS: I got this 'theme' from a movie :D

3 comments:

rimz said...

an awards waiting for u in my blog..:),check it..:)

VINEET said...

lovely....i mean how u can b so expressv in so less no. of lines..beautiful

Anoop said...

ooh...thank u so much rimz.. :D

vineet
thank u thank u thank u... :)

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