Saturday, October 3, 2009

mY vErY FiRsT 55 fiCTioN... :D

55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.


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THE DISGUISE!
'Nothin suspicious. It could b wrong information. You leave, Alan.' Police Officer said.

Few hours later, at some place...

'Where it is, Alan?' asked the fatso...
'take it' Alan gave the 2 deodorant bottles he had.
'Alan, meet this guy. He is our man!' the fatso screamed...
'Is he the officer i met?' thought Alan...
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PS: Hi Guys, I'm sorry if this was not a good one. This is my first post related to 55Fiction. i used to read fictions in 'Hits and Misses' blog n i got inspired by that. let me say my thanks to Shruthi first of all... :D Let me know your comments about it. Should i try this again or was this post so borin that i shud keep my conscience away from '55Fiction'? :D

12 comments:

√♪נ汉Ψ said...

Nice attempt..........
Don't stop here..
Keep writing...

Anoop said...

Thanks dude! :D

Urvashi said...

Hey..its great...!! actually its difficult to write things in jus 55 words...I mean difficult to write meaningful things...!! :P

U shd keep writing..!!!

Gd luck wid it..!! :)

☥ ѕωαмι ηανєєη said...

sorry didnt get it .. read it quite a few times ... !!!

Anoop said...

Urvashi..
yea its really very tough to write meaningful things.. i was counting the number f words everytime to make it less than 55... khe khe khe...
thank u so much Urvashi :D

Anoop said...

naveen
its okay.. ;)
read it again... one day u ll get it.. :P
khe khe khe... ;)
thanks for ur genuine comments.. :D

Shruti said...

Hi anoop!
I was searching 55F in ur other blogs!
Hey i couldn't understand what u have written!! :(

Anoop said...

Shruthi
:((
u dint understand??? :O khe khe khe.. :P
wat i meant was 'the polic officer s the drug dealer :O :D

its ok... i ll try to write betta fictions next time.. ;)
thanks for commentin :)

Karthik said...

Way to go, dude. To be honest i quite didn't get it the first time i read. But after reading your above comment, i understood. :D
Then i read it again and liked it very much. Don't stop, man. Keep writing. Waiting for your next short fiction (or even long)... :)

Anoop said...

karthik
thanks man...evry1 said they dint understand wat i meant.. :((
khe khe khe... u know the drug was hidden in the deodorant bottles...n the police officer was the dealer.. :D

n thanks man...
would definitely write more fictions.. :) though its not my type.. :D

Pooja Menon said...

Hey Anoop.. This was a very novel concept man.. Never heard of it before.. And your story was good too, considering the fact that there were limitations! Keep penning.. Looking forward to read more of 55F from you.. :-)

Anoop said...

Pooja
yea its tough..hehe
u shud also try writin fictions.. its fun....

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