Tuesday, October 27, 2009

55 fiCTioN

55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.


THE BETRAYAL
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Hey, you shouldn’t stay here. You must leave soon. Take the money and leave.” said the man pointing to the bag on the table.

Police is everywhere. I need to leave this place. Very soon!. the killer thought

The man gripped on the revolver in his pocket when the killer moved to grab the bag…
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PS: This is my 4th 55F story. i dono if i'm improving or worsening my writing skills.. :D Let me know :)

7 comments:

Sunakshi said...

you've been tagged again =)

Pooja Menon said...

Good one.. You have the knack of being precise.. Keep penning..!!

Anoop said...

Thanks Sunakshi

Anoop said...

Hey so many comments pooja.. WOW!
n thanks... ;)

Sunakshi said...

You have been tagged once more xD =)

Karthik said...

This is definitely better than your previous one dude. Awesome!
Keep writing more. :-)

Anoop said...

Thanks Karthik..
:)

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