Sunday, October 4, 2009

55Fiction #2

55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.
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THE DREAM-VISIT

Her legs were tied to a thick rope. She was being dragged.
‘Where is this place?’ she asked
‘Yamalok’
‘What? Why you brought me here?’
‘Dead people belong…Oh no…Not this lady! Take her back!’ ordered Yama.
She woke up from her dream.
She was shocked to see the marks on her legs!
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PS: This is my 2nd attempt to write a 55Fiction. I thought writing a 55Fiction story is too easy but its jus the opposite. It is too tough. OMG! Finding a correct title is another problem :|i would make it better next time. i'm jus a beginner. So please excuse me if it is boring. :D

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

is it a real incident??

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Priya said...

nice attempt... keep it up:)

An Ordinary Gal said...

gud one...keep trying :)

Anoop said...

thank u so much priya...

riya
thank u thank u... :D

Urvashi said...

hmm...this is good.... !! :)

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