55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.
THE BETRAYAL
THE BETRAYAL
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Hey, you shouldn’t stay here. You must leave soon. Take the money and leave.” said the man pointing to the bag on the table.
Police is everywhere. I need to leave this place. Very soon!. the killer thought
The man gripped on the revolver in his pocket when the killer moved to grab the bag…
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PS: This is my 4th 55F story. i dono if i'm improving or worsening my writing skills.. :D Let me know :)
Hey, you shouldn’t stay here. You must leave soon. Take the money and leave.” said the man pointing to the bag on the table.
Police is everywhere. I need to leave this place. Very soon!. the killer thought
The man gripped on the revolver in his pocket when the killer moved to grab the bag…
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PS: This is my 4th 55F story. i dono if i'm improving or worsening my writing skills.. :D Let me know :)
7 comments:
you've been tagged again =)
Good one.. You have the knack of being precise.. Keep penning..!!
Thanks Sunakshi
Hey so many comments pooja.. WOW!
n thanks... ;)
You have been tagged once more xD =)
This is definitely better than your previous one dude. Awesome!
Keep writing more. :-)
Thanks Karthik..
:)
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